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Dear Sir/Madam,
I want to express my strong dissatisfaction with the service I received during my visit to your hotel from March 30th till April 5th.
Firstly, when I first entered my suite I discovered that it wasn't cleantd after the previous visitors: towels were lying on the floor, the bed was untidy, wardrobes were opened and pegs (вешалки) were dropped out of it. The curtains also were unironed and dirty. Such a greeting of a respectable hotel is disgusting.
Secondly, 2 days later it was also found that running water in the bath was switched off and I even couldn't take a shower! In hotels cold and ot running water is neccessary!
And at last, when I ordered fruits in my suite it was delivered only in an hour and 15 minutes by a very gloomy worker who entered the room without permission and then ran away without a word.
I'm sure I'll nrver rest in your hotel again. And I advice you, as a manager of the hotel, to guard against such appalling treatment of your customers in future.
Yours faithfully,
Ann Khrisanfova.

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hamed | 28-03-2007 - 12:41:13 GMT 1 #
It's a good piece of writing, Ann. But still, I think a bit milder complaint would make more positive impression on the target reader. This will bring you credits. Minats
minats | 28-03-2007 - 20:11:43 GMT 1 #