Writing #6
a)
Dear, Alise,
The birthday party you invited me to on August 29th sounds great.
I'm really pleased to receive it and I'd love to come. This day, 29th of August, really suits me as a free one.
Though, it has been not so long time since we've seen each other, I'm sure we'll spend enjoyable time joking and sharing news with each other. Please let me know what I can do to help. Perhaps, I can organise the music.
Oh, one other thing. Will it be all right to bring my dog Bonny with me? No one of my neighbors can sit with him this day.
Thanks again, and see you on the 29th.
Love, Ann.
b)
Dear Richard and Judy,
Your 25th Wedding Anniversary you have invited me to on October 15th sounds greatly.
Unfortunately, I won't be able make it as it is my Maths exam for entrancing the Financial Avademy to make. It is a very important event for me and I really can't miss it as I was prepairing for it the whole year.
It's such a pity I can't visit you as it is amazing that you have already been together for 25 years! It's suvh an experience term! I want to wish your family flourishing, love and new children, who will gladden you all your life.
But, maybe, we can arrange to get together another time instead. Perhaps, I'll throw a party on my husbend's Birthday so we can see each other that time. I'll let you know/
Thanks for the invitation again, and hope the party go well.
Love, Ann.

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Dear Ann,
Your formal letter is slightly worse than an informal one. It's quite undestandable. Keep trying, though. I'll try to bring my feedback to the class.
minats | 10-04-2007 - 17:17:08 GMT 1 #